Peace or War?
Peace or War? What kind of question is that, we all know Peace is the answer. Peace is better than war. We don't want young children around us to grow up in a place where it is a battlefield. A place where innocent people die. We don't like to start World War 3. We don't like to see homes and places ruined or burnt down. What a waste of beautiful structure that has to be rebuilt because of war.
Another form of war is violence, it is not the answer. War isn't either. You see? In war children are the ones that are greatly affected. They loose their family and they become orphans and will live on the streets begging, they have no money or parents to support them. Why do we even consider war? Why can’t we learn from World War 1 and World War 2 that War isn't the answer?
The government leaders should think hard about this before they take their armies to fight in war or to be in war. It is really unfair for those people who don’t want war but instead other people insist to have it.
The government leaders should think hard about this before they take their armies to fight in war or to be in war. It is really unfair for those people who don’t want war but instead other people insist to have it.
By: Tino
Tino you are so convincing on your argument, you have pointed few things you believed war can do. Please show your work before posting next time .. there are few things to edit. But keep writing, I can see your thoughts and feelings .. you are developing your skill in writing-- keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThank You I will keep that in mind and change a few things in my work
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Great work Tino I love it! However please do not do a space and then full stop. Keep posting Tino and I would love to see your other posts.
ReplyDeleteYup I have already edited it and thank you for your opinion
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I agree with Faith.
ReplyDeleteTino thank you for being proactive in answering comments-- that's how it should be-- courtesy!!
ReplyDeleteWell done to you!!
Thank you for the comment Mrs Cochrane!
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