Kia ora Tino! I think your presentation is really informal. Now I respect the Brazillians for their amazing dishes! This reaches out to all of the Brazilians out there, but maybe trying to write in your own words would give your opinion on what Brazil is about would help alot. Sometimes, adding a touch more class would do the trick! Next time try describing your perspective on things to inform others about your thoughts. Other than that, this DLO was magnificent! Check out my blog each week to see new posts: hpstomam.blogspot.co.nz Aiming for posts each day! From, Toma
Bom Dia Tino! I love your presentation it's so full of knowledge. I have learnt so much about Brazill now. One of my favourites was the slide about the national bird. "I think my brain is going to explode" About their dancing I would of liked something about their costume because it looks amazing. This Presentation was AMAZING, Keep up the Great Work! I would love it if you could check out my blog http://hpshunterc.blogspot.co.nz/
Hey there Tino, I am a student from Wesley Intermediate School named Siutaisa. I have read your presentation about Brazil and I think you presented your work in a expected level for your age. Your work is on a good quality and in a high Standard. When I read your presentation, I was so shocked how a smart kid like you would present your work. Good effort Tino.
Kia ora Tino!
ReplyDeleteI think your presentation is really informal. Now I respect the Brazillians for their amazing dishes! This reaches out to all of the Brazilians out there, but maybe trying to write in your own words would give your opinion on what Brazil is about would help alot. Sometimes, adding a touch more class would do the trick! Next time try describing your perspective on things to inform others about your thoughts.
Other than that, this DLO was magnificent!
Check out my blog each week to see new posts:
hpstomam.blogspot.co.nz
Aiming for posts each day!
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Toma
Thanks Toma! It was very nice of you to comment on my blog but the thing is I did write it in my own words! But I appreciate your comment!
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Bom Dia Tino!
ReplyDeleteI love your presentation it's so full of knowledge. I have learnt so much about Brazill now.
One of my favourites was the slide about the national bird.
"I think my brain is going to explode"
About their dancing I would of liked something about their costume because it looks amazing.
This Presentation was AMAZING, Keep up the Great Work!
I would love it if you could check out my blog
http://hpshunterc.blogspot.co.nz/
Hunter
Thanks for the comment Hunter! I checked out your blog and it was interesting!
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Hey there Tino, I am a student from Wesley Intermediate School named Siutaisa.
ReplyDeleteI have read your presentation about Brazil and I think you presented your work in a expected level for your age. Your work is on a good quality and in a high Standard.
When I read your presentation, I was so shocked how a smart kid like you would present your work. Good effort Tino.